More and more students choose to go to another country for higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the problem?
Most students choose to study abroad for higher education, because there are greater opportunities. In my view study in another county is may develop our skills, and develop your language. Therefore, by studying abroad, students can expend their knowledge and gain qualifications that open the door to better job opportunities. Also young people are open a different culture and traditions. And you could see new civilization and you can develop cultural shock, language barrier and other skills. Also you can find new clothe friends and this people could help for your study, living and speaking. And in a different county people better earn money for a food, living and using transport.
On the other hand, study in another country could effected your behavior, for example in a different country you can do not know enter to terrorism, also you may be start junk happens. And study there not easy. Language barrier can cause serious difficulties, living and studying in the new foreign country, in order studying different county could effected for your family finance, following this not every students could agree for work and earn money in a day off.
In conclusion, I would say study in another country is good way for the developing future career, in term of better universities and great opportunities, do outweigh the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13242009132 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72866106534 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7108694231 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.181818182 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180175500463 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721912194966 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624161954042 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138552369489 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126905312125 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.