Some people think people are responsible for a solution to pollution made by transportation and others think that government are. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Some masses support the opinion that the pollution caused by vehicles should be controlled by human being itself while others asserted that the administration should to take stringent steps to overcome the pollution problems. In my view, both people and government are equally responsible to solve pollution relating issues.
To begin with, it is the primary duty of the mortals to limit the use of private vehicles that are emitting harmful gasses such as carbon monoxide and carbon dioxide in atmosphere and polluting it. In the modernised world, everyone is using their own transport system to migrate from one place to other place for different purposes such as, going to their workplace and educational centres. this results greater amount of pollution that can be controlled only by using public vehicles by folks. Moreover, the persons should grow much more plants and trees as they can as trees are the best alternative to reduce the rate of pollution by absorbing radiations and gases emitted by vehicles.
On the other hand, some argued that the ad ministry is more responsible to resolve the issues relating pollution made by transportation. this is possible only when the regime would provide public transport facilities to people that are cheaper and convenient. Furthermore, the administration should aware the public about the importance of trees that are the best source to decrease the level of pollution caused by motor vehicles. In this way, all problem created by transport system would be resolved.
In conclusion, the pollution created by vehicles can be controlled by equal contribution of public and ministry by the use of public transports and growing many trees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78340632653 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9566355251 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.454545455 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201913285787 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809547533134 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740744699559 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125912373349 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706766358123 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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