Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Mankind has always been in pursuit of happiness. However, to be happy, it is very important to understand the true meaning of joy. Some individuals believe that being happy from within is directly proportional to ones financial well being, while many others opine that internal bliss and joy is dependent upon many other important factors such as being content, knowledge, love, kindness and many more. In this write up, I would attempt to discuss about these two views to attain internal happiness and would also try to explain my opinion regarding this.
To begin with, being prosper is very important, in terms to live the life at it's best. In modern world, money opens many doors that lead to happiness. For instance, traveling to a beautiful place fills our heart with joy. However, to go to such a wonderful place, you need to be having sufficient amount of wealth. Not having enough financial resources, compels one to curtail many essential and leisure activities. This leads to significant frustration and turmoil in ones life.
On the other hand, many believe that being rich alone can not guarantee happiness. There are many other important factors apart from money that are essential to be happy. For example, a rich man who has many diseases or a wealthy woman who is alone can never be happy just because they have enough financial resources. In contrast, a healthy man who is having limited wealth or a poor woman having a supporting family could be much more joyful.
To conclude, I would like to opine that although being rich is a very important aspect in pursuit of happiness, but one can not deny the importance of aspects like health, love, companionship, kindness and above all understanding of own limitations. True joy that comes from within, depends upon a practical equilibrium between prosperity and other important factors in life.
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- Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success while others believe this depends on other factors Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99038461538 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64349640152 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9631632 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14591175243 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453716610759 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611973607303 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931503532037 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706449620002 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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