Some people think planning future is a waste of time and people should focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that planning for the future is a crucial part of every human life. While some say concentrating on the present is practical, I would argue that having clear strategies for the times ahead is far more advantageous for people to taste the fruit of success.
Undoubtedly, creating a master plan for the future keeps a person motivated and ambitious throughout his or her life. In other words, a person with clear career goals have to exert themselves and put a lot of efforts to achieve these objectives. For example, students who want to become a scientist must widen their knowledge in Scientific, Maths, Physics, and other subjects during high school years in order to pass the admission tests for further academic courses. Hence, people having a strategy for the future are likely to reach their goals easier than those who do not formulate their own plans.
Moreover, planning carefully for the days ahead encourages an individual to save a great deal of money when it comes to possessing something valuable or saving for a rainy day. For instance, if a person have a proposal for running a business, they will need a certain amount of capital which must be collected gradually from now on. Likewise, the savings will help them tide over any financial crises that they may face in the future. Thus, planning to save money will address the needs of finance in time to come.
In conclusion, although there are people who claim that dealing with things at the moment is better than preparing plans for the future, I believe that future planning does more wonders in terms of making one’s ambitions and saving money for pursuing their goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9014084507 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51977892998 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.833525201 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.545454545 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129206596561 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556282509386 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502783771597 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944412480046 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456346388883 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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