Some people think that robot technology is very important for our future. Some others believe that robots are dangerous invention and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give opinion.
In the modern era, the development of technology is significant. Some people consider that technology, especially robots, are vital to human development, whereas many people harbor a submission that these things are badly affected by our life. As my standpoint, both given justifications will be discussed in this essay.
On one hand, there is a widespread consensus that machines, robots are not safe and it also can be a precursor of the negative effects on the structure of society. The key reason why people think that is artificial intelligence and self-development ability of robots which is a tool for the improvement of it. In detaily described, robots could do many things that people cannot. Take one example, robots and technology play a pivotal role in scientific research such as outer space research, they can work without any oxygen or water. Furthermore, because of it abilities on infinity development and the durable longevity, it is not excluded the possibility that robots want to control human beings.
In my opinion, technology and robots are important to our subsequent which is a replacement to human labour power. Firstable, robots have the abilities to do many kind of manufacturing task with the built and coded of scientists. It will produce more efficient of jobs in a short period of time, hence, the money and time spent for salaries of employees can be reduced because of it economical for companies. For instance, 60 percent of industry had been done by robots in Japanese renowned car company Toyota. Finally, due to the general development of society, technology and robots is a dispensable thing which can bring back many positive effects to our development.
To conclude, while many people think that robots are badly affected to society, I maintain a standpoint that the benefits outweigh the given drawbacks. People should learn to control them to an optimal level instead of worrying about its drawbacks.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...stable, robots have the abilities to do many kind of manufacturing task with the built an...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tists. It will produce more efficient of jobs in a short period of time, hence, t...
^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...duce more efficient of jobs in a short period of time, hence, the money and time spent for sa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15141955836 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9725095248 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570977917981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7743328619 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.866666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288636405176 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897119299999 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042800462353 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157002688618 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440925997622 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...stable, robots have the abilities to do many kind of manufacturing task with the built an...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tists. It will produce more efficient of jobs in a short period of time, hence, t...
^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...duce more efficient of jobs in a short period of time, hence, the money and time spent for sa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15141955836 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9725095248 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570977917981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7743328619 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.866666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288636405176 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897119299999 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042800462353 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157002688618 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440925997622 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.