Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some people argue that global’s health should be the main concern of scientific research, others believe that different other type of problems should also be prioritized. Although I believe the purposes of such research is to enhance people’s health, studying about other issues also plays an important roles.
On the one hand, it is reasonable for people who are working in scientific field to pay significant attention in human’s health. There are numerous of diseases and illnesses which yet have appropriate cure. With the fast-growing development of technology and new technique, such concern will be able to create new treatment for patient at reasonable cost. Moreover, with the appearance of COVID-19, humanity around the world are suffering searching for medical care as much as ever before. If governments around the world spend more budget for medical deparment for researching medicine and vaccine, it could save a lot of people, especially at some developing countries with poor health conditions and welfare.
On the other hand, other aspects should not be neglected, since people’s health is affected by various factors. Environment is one of the main things which directly impacts citizen’s health, the consequences of biodiversity decline and global warming could lead to more disease and pandemic in the near future. Moreover, financial status is also the reason for many people not able to approach appropriate health care as the economic condition is poor. If people still caring for their health, these issues should be considered with appropriate solutions.
All things considered, although research for health is vital, other problems such as the environment and economic conditions of a country are also affect to have an influence on human’s life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
...ut other issues also plays an important roles. On the one hand, it is reasonable fo...
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Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...onomic conditions of a country are also affect to have an influence on human’s life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84058715655 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562724014337 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7358530317 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.583333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233101508015 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939233708921 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714563582575 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157529785353 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758353616903 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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