Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes believed that instructing a law-breaker would be more useful than imprisoning him. Personally, I do not think this is a workable method.
On the one hand, education is not a kind of punishment creating a deterrent to criminals. It habitually focuses on heightening the criminals' accomplishments which can bring a skilled workforce for society when they get out. However, some villains have made use of this government‘s tolerance for them to continue the redemption process. For instance, juvenile offenders, who are a typical example of those criminals being instructed instead of in prison, ascertain that they will not be imprisoned. Consequently, they do not repent of their violations and continue to sin after getting out of reformatory. Therefore, it is impossible for education to work on the heinous criminals.
On the other hand, confining recidivists is not only a commensurate penalty for them but also ensures the safety for those abiding the law. By enduring the extreme hardship in prison, the offenders can realise the depth of their sins. As a result, they will feel remorse for having violated federal law. Meanwhile, the citizens can also have a peaceful life, no longer worried about the disturbance caused by these offenders. My friend, as an example, who used to be afraid of going home alone himself at night because of the hooligans in his neighborhood, now can enjoy the parties without taking off soon as all of these hooligans have been put into jail by the police’s raiding.
In conclusion, although education is an ethical approach, it still has several flaws and can not be the final judgment for all types of various crimes. I suppose that serving a prison sentence is the most appropriate measure for the delinquents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 683, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation to work on the heinous criminals. On the other hand, confining recidivists...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12027491409 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00371164214 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6713750588 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099175657771 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357436080776 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258279682208 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619514181486 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224142096086 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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