Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children’s who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults. discuss both view and give your own opinion.
There is a debate among some amounts of people about children who are motivated to be more rivalrous or cooperative. Although competitive environment is necessary to achieve success in life, I personally believe that to be involved with a group of people will teach how to be a team player as long as it provides an opportunity to broaden pupils’ horizons.
Providing a competitive atmosphere to children might bring about beneficial outcomes for them. It can be a reasonable motivator to learn, especially at the early stages of childhood. Children acquire knowledge by observing each other in various activities, so this can grow a competitive spirit in them. Moreover, Healthy competition enhances the EQ by boosting the skill of problem-solving. It will aid youngsters in becoming more confident and independent in their life in which they figure out a successful future.
On the other hand, The ability to co-operate is essential for all the aspects of their life. Due to the fact that cooperation improves the offsprings’ associative leap and soft skills such as empathy, stimulating children to recognize the significance of teamwork may help them develop their personality. Additionally, taking part in a team as an entertaining affair sets a platform for the youth to apprehend topics of study clearly. Furthermore, by discussing their lessons the possibility of achieving more comprehensive data arouses.
In conclusion , although competetion results in one's own emendations in numerous ways , I strongly support the cultivation of collaboration among juveniles for it leads to a more distinguished destiny in adulthood.
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- Writing task 1
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mprehensive data arouses. In conclusion , although competetion results in ones ow...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in ones own emendations in numerous ways , I strongly support the cultivation of c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42352941176 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35249630569 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654901960784 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8441103625 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210246466374 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694919681136 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524966156275 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112082983079 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554323939752 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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