Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged.Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged.
Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The competition has been increased drastically over the years. In relation to this, some assert that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged while others presume that the children with sense of co-operation become better adults. Both the aspects are discussed in the following paragraphs.

To begin with,in the era of competition,life seems to be a race. An individual has to be better than the rest in order to be a successful person. The proactive measures are taken by parents and teachers which attributed a sense of hunger to be at the top and quality to compete. An individual must be emotionally balanced and intellectually clear to compete and survive. It has been seen that the sense of competition among sportsmen plays a pivotal role. Moreover, as far as studies are concerned, the hard work and determination to compete is the key role to success nowadays. For an illustration, to get admission in a reputed institute which comprises of minimal number of vacant seats, one must be better than the rest which is solely judged by competitive exam.

Moving further, sometimes being competitive means being selfish and arrogant.One can not shun the importance of co-operation.Healthy competing changed the dynamics of the term competition. Most of the youths are like this, who helps the other colleges related to academics etcetera and give substantial competition in an exam or in any activity. This behaviour portray the character of an individual. These kind of person undoubtedly become the most reputated and benevolent personality of society. Henceforth,moral values and co-operation go hand in hand.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, while, as to, kind of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25190839695 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27793939261 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2654695984 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260231198051 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074208569157 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734599680414 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191476538227 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938261855572 0.056905535591 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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