Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while other believe that children learn teamwork. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the sport has gained a lot of attention from society. We will discuss about how people share their experiences related to different games, Some people might think a game will teach how to compete with others while others believed that it is a teamwork game.
Everyone has to admit, children are mostly involved in extracurricular activities, especially in sports. However, sport centres always teaches student to fight till the last breath of life, it has specific significance which will be helpfull to motivate players. Competing with other players will help to study opponent's skills and techniques to counter it required deep study. Competing with others will help to figure it out with a comprehensive study. Hunger for success created due to the competitive features of any player.
Competitiveness is the not only answer for success, there are other factors which are playing vital role any game. Unless teamwork we unable to manipulate opponents. Where each and every player has a specific skill and plethora of energy, which can turn out to be biggest asset for any team. Encouraging each other, strengthening weak points these are outcomes of teamwork.
Football game is the best example for this where single player cannot achieve victory, and without competitiveness enable to defeat opposition.
In conclusion, to compete and teamwork are the two sides of coin where both has equal value. So I strongly agree with this statement in which we need to accept to compete and teamwork not any one of it.
However to much competitiveness not healthy for any game in my opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, while, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14942528736 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79832537733 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0606366222 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193345853533 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551474581862 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694731425164 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089119430871 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949231580717 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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