Some people think that sports games are very important for society. Others, however argue that is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discus both views and give your own opinion.
It is sometimes argued that sports games are of great significance for society as a whole while others believe that it is just a pastime. I am of the opinion that sports deserve to be seen as indispensable activities for several reasons below.
For people who are not expert players in this field, their purposes of playing sports are just to look for excitement and joyfulness. People would enjoy playing sports to socialize with others in their free time, which usually allows them to release stress effectively after work. As a result, they are less likely to struggle with mental illnesses and able to lead happier lives. For example, it has been proven that individuals doing sports such as badminton or swimming on a regular basis have been more satisfied with their lives than those who do not engage in these physical activities.
However, in a bigger picture, I contend that sports games can bring a wide range of benefits to society. Firstly, sports play a vital role in a country' economic growth. This is mainly because sports competitions can generate sales for commercial companies by sponsorships and advertisements, resulting in more profits and revenue. Sports could also improve the companies' brand recognition among consumers, which has a positive impact on business success. Secondly, international sports games can narrow the gap between developed and developing countries, making the world a better place. In fact, there are a number of universal sports competitions such as World Cup and Olympics held to welcome all nations to participate in. This offers a chance for professional athletes from all corners of the world to compete, building closer relationships among countries.
In conclusion, while it seems for some people that sports are only used to relax, I believe that sports are advantageous with regard to economy and relationship development among nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21568627451 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83486890263 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6267498675 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221076956269 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745289063599 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517031673862 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146561268929 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052027946905 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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