Some people think success of life is based on hard work and determination but others think there are more important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion?

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Some people think success of life is based on hard work and determination but others think there are more important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion?

People always have different opinions on the reasons of success. While some people believe inner conditions such as industriousness and determination are the most crucial factors, others argue outer conditions like beauty and wealth matters. In my opinion, although outer conditions may offer help, inner ones are of great importance.

On the one hand, some insist that being diligent and determined are the keys to a successful life. In this day and age, with an increasing number of people getting higher level of education, there is no doubt that the job market is more fierce and competitive. If one pursued his career without making extra effort, he would not excel and even never achieve his dream life. Besides, people having determination are more likely to be encouraged because they know that they want and how far they go. Indeed, many actors, such as Wang Baoqiang in China, born in a poor family does not have a delicate face becomes famous stars around the world. From their interview we get to know how hard they have worked and how determined they have been.

On the other hand,others persist good looking and money are factors that decide one’s success. This is because most time pretty appearance can leave a good impression on people. When there are two candidates with the same qualification for an available job, it is more likely that the one with more outstanding appearance would get the position. This is true for majority of jobs. For another thing, money, as the necessity of people’s life, definitely helps people succeed. For example, a proper businessman need initial capital. Compared with people who have to fight for themselves to get the start-up capital, those with enough money have already won at the beginning.

In my opinion, without gorgeous appearance and wealth, people have to experience a lot beyond their imagination before attaining their final goals. However, no matter how rich or how pretty a person is, he would never be successful if he did not try his best or be motivated inherently.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , others
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, may, so, while, another thing, for example, no doubt, such as, for another thing, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03519061584 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65846088572 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598240469208 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7975116932 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3888888889 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187459709496 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059928032178 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498289550883 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108038446407 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371702309992 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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