The number of people believe that, it is the duity of teacher to give good and bad knowledge to school children in order to have proper manner. Some argue that, academic studies should be important at school. I have intention to discuss both side of argument.
On one hand, school is the place where children learn more things. It is the main responsibility of teachers to give them proper guidance so, that they will behave well in the school, society and at home. For example, teachers should teach the children from beginning of the school. Positive habits such as, giving respect to elders and love to juniors. Showing good manner infront of all people even if we do not know then well. Teaching washing hand techniques after each meals.Negative habits like, shouting in loud voice to elder, beating your little one’s and using bad word to people should be taught by teachers not to follow them. Therefore, it is the main important thing teachers should teach them right and wrong behavior.
On other side, it is very essential to have academic knowledge for children at school . The ideas they get from academic studies. Which will be benifical in the future. In addition, the skills and techniques we get from teachers at school will help in our presentation and results in our academic results. teachers might become friends with children so, they can trust them. For instance, if a child are taught various types of practical and theoretical studies from teachers by showing in viedo clips or by demonstration then,it would be easy to understand and they might not forget them.later on, children can use that ideas and show some presentations infornt of their family. Thus,it is significant to have academic knowledge to have successful life in future.
In conclusion, teachers play vital role in children life to make them better person. In my opinion, both the Academic studies and good behaviors are needed for children to become successful person in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91362126246 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52069414087 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538205980066 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2950887153 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229929555264 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757622868708 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684530746596 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1386744076 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826559465416 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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