Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crimes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, it is believed that the advancement of technology can decrease illegal activities, while others claim that it can drive people to commit crimes. Both viewpoints are reasonable, but personally, I gravitate toward the latter.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people advocate developing technology that would help drop the criminals rates. Firstly, using modern materials would facilitate the law enforcement process. This is because the police force, equipped with a wide range of telecommunication devices such as walkie- talkie and the latest satellite phones, as well as modes of transport such as patrol care and helicopter, could respond to emergencies much more swiftly with closer collaboration. Secondly, many technological techniques provide vital evidence for crime investigations such as DNA- test, CCTV footages, fingerprint match in trials against suspects. In fact, many outlaws may have acquired by lack sufficient proofs in the past when technology was undeveloped.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the advancement of weapons and communication methods incentivize offenders to proceed their plan fearlessly for several reasons. The first reason is that it is easy for lawbreakers ranging from burglary to armed robbery having access to lethal destructive weapons in the dark market. This leads to them would able to fierce opposite to defend their illicit interests. In addition, followed by advanced bank systems, criminals could trade internationally. In fact, they can open many foreign bank accounts and use untraceable dark webs to successfully make a conspiracy, illegal money transactions.
In conclusion, there may be some reasons to support using new technology to reduce crimes, I believe that collateral damage caused by it coexists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60805860806 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13164748703 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688644688645 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9991233766 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.769230769 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145549848841 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438849362821 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551925892132 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920767860743 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571113811712 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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