Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about noise issue in any public place. Some people state that some essential measures should be applied to control noise, others believe that they have freedom to make as much noise as they want. I totally agree that it is would be better to reduce noise.
First, it is clear that it is more benifical to impose some laws to strict control noise which has negative consequence to both their work and life. This means that noise has harmful impact on people health, particular in metal and physical health. Therefore, it is necessary for all people to need to minimize noise as possible.
Moreover, productivity of work may be reduced by consequense of noise. For example, most of staff who permanently work in workshop, have to suffer the constant noise from vehicles in the streets, this make them not to fully focus on their task.
On the other hand, there are many reasons that people like to make as much noise as they like. Of course, many people feel more confortable and freedom when making noise while working or entertaining. In addion, people argue that noise is as a part of mordernization process therefore it is unavoidable so traffic noise seems to have become more familiar to urban citizens.
In conclusion, I still believe that the reduction noise will make life become more better, although some people insist on making a lot of noise without any consideration for others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...e reduction noise will make life become more better, although some people insist on making ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9028340081 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54634950835 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0294209123 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.916666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338022693357 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125434860724 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114952989246 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187983660979 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113829196161 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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