Some people think that video games are advantageous, while others believe video games are harmful to
the people who play them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Technology has made numerous gadgets which caused our life too leisurely however, video games are one of the example of it. so this topic asserts that playing video games is beneficial where as other claims spending a time with gaming console is injurious to those people who consume it alot.so this essay will outlines in both arguments in detail and give a opinion below.
To originate on, video games are made for entertainment purpose which is valuable to play it in leisure time. For insight, to the contemporary era, every individual is tighten with their hectic schedule where is very difficult to spare the time for relax. Therefore, invention of gaming consoles have been made for youngster as well as every generation of the people to make their time awesome.
On the contrary part, consuming a excessive amount of time at video games lets turn us to live sedentary lifestyle which can alarm the diseases like back pain, obesity and myopia. For example, there was news came on internet about 15 years old boy who had played a lot of video games on led television and he was always excited by high visual graphics of video games which always caused him experience a that he was in real life. one day he decided to tried a some of action which he always do in video games. he did a fly kick to the sky that a time he had fallen from the balcony and he died.
In conclusion, it is clear video games are designed for passing a free time. But it does not mean to play all the time.it could be harmful to our health if play it excessively instead of this we should spend some time with our grand parent who oftenly feels so isolate at home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51839464883 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35106828134 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598662207358 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5746585314 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.818181818 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26874145189 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106636195069 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727030941204 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170291326295 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666884361286 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.