Some people think that watching sport is a waste of leisure time.
Do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, people’s stress level is very high due to hectic pace of life in big urban areas. The reason of this is that people have to work long hours and spend many time for journeys to get to their destinations. As a result, at the end of working weekend they suffer from stress level and good way tackle this situation is watching sports as it helps to relieve the tension. In addition, people who relieve their stress level by watching sports do not consume big amounts of alcohol and this benefits their health.
Another point to consider is that sport bring together all fans and help them to make new friends. In other words, when people are fans of any sport they gather together in different places such as pubs and sport centers to watch sports. Furthermore, sport fans are usually members of different worldwide fan-clubs and they travel to different countries for sport events with other member. This helps people to wide their knowledge about other countries and cultures and find new friends from different countries.
In conclusion, watching sport helps people to reduce stress level, find new friend and to travel to different countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...eople have to work long hours and spend many time for journeys to get to their destinatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40954647235 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.0296674624 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183122296967 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851232940112 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445243013566 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132689287508 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134823459923 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.