It is argued that a tourist that travels abroad should respect the traditions and the customs of the host country. This essay partially agrees with this statement because adapting the local culture is dependent on the place where tourists are.
From an ethical perspective, it is immoral to publicly show a disrespectful behavior that contradicts the customs and the beliefs of local inhabitants. Not taking into account the feelings of the indigenous people who host others from different backgrounds is hurtful and irresponsible. Tourists, prior to traveling to any place, should at least inform themselves about the culture of their destinations so as to avoid conflicts with the locals and enjoy the maximum throughout the period of their vacations. For instance, a common trend in most of the UK’s travel agencies to offer free booklets and magazines to familiarize their clients about other’s cultures, before traveling.
On the other hand, tourists should have an absolute freedom in areas that are restricted and allotted for them. That is to say, totally depriving people who travel to other nations from their total freedom will make them shy away from visiting countries that coerce them to abide by the local culture, even when they are alone. In the UAE, for instance, drinking spirits is prohibited in public areas, but not in hotels and places that are designated for tourists.
In conclusion, I believe that adapting others’ cultures depends on the place where tourists are. It is compulsory for foreign incomers to respect the local culture in public areas; however; it is not necessary to do so in private places that are allotted for tourists.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...about the culture of their destinations so as to avoid conflicts with the locals and enj...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'absolute freedom'.
Suggestion: absolute freedom
...On the other hand, tourists should have an absolute freedom in areas that are restricted and allott...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, as to, at least, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23247232472 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76118338006 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1595591699 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.909090909 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177808973089 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655379469376 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363319357464 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110509650368 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019443094999 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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