Today people are travelling more than ever before. Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
Nowadays, people are increasingly traveling to other nations as compared to the past. This essay believes that the main reason behind this phenomenon is mainly due to aircraft invention. Secondly, discuss the benefits that can be yielded from visiting other countries on a personal and economic level.
The groundbreaking invention of the airplane has enabled people to roam the world conveniently and comfortably. Unlike in the past when caravans used to cross deserts, coasts and snaking risky paths to reach their destinations on horse carts and camels, in this modern era, it has become possible to spend just a few hours to cross a thousand miles itinerary, laying on a comfortable sofa and facing an entertaining TV. For instance, a statistical study that was carried out by Yale University showed that the number of air trips has dramatically increased over the last few decades.
The primary advantages that can be reaped from visiting other countries can be informative and economically lucrative. That is to say, traveling abroad and trying new experiences in life, such as getting to know other people from different backgrounds, make friends and try new other types of food and ceremonies brings people together. Also, host countries would greatly benefit from tourists who are considered one of the fundamental sources of income and activity to local businesses. For example, Morocco has more than doubled its GDP in 2015 by dint of the tourism industry which is considered the main source of total income.
In conclusion, I believe that the availability of air flight service around the clock has brought about this new trend of people travel more frequently. Also, visiting other nations can be educative to guests and source of income to the host country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16724738676 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80460318518 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4158804978 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185646317068 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659236318392 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662005075078 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117000997662 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448735436765 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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