Some People Think That When A Person Travels Into A Different Culture They Should Adapt To The Local Practices And Customs.To What Extent Do You Agree?
A few people are of the opinion that one must adapt to the local traditions and practices when one travels into a different culture. I strongly advocate the above idea of adapting to the local traditions for a few reasons.
Firstly, it is of utmost importance to blend in the crowd to understand the traditions of the localities. There's an old proverb which says, 'When in Rome, be a Roman" which means that one must indulge oneself in the practices of the area of their travel. Traveling is not only for sight-seeing but also for understanding the cultures and traditions of the localities. For instance, I had traveled to Hyderabad to meet my sister in the year 2018. During my stay in Hyderabad, I came across this unique traditional festival called "Batukamma". I was both confabulated and excited to know more about the festival. As a result of this, I took part in their traditional event and successfully learned the significance of this event. Hence, by embracing one's culture, one can educate oneself on the traditions which are unique to a particular location.
Secondly, when tourists embrace the local customs and traditions, it evokes a feeling of trust in local residents as a result of which they start treating the tourist as one of their own kind. This can be beneficial to the tourists as they often encounter scammers in a new land. This situation can be eradicated by having local residents as your travel guide. Tourists can also save a huge deal of money as the residents would help them with pocket-friendly restaurants or shopping complexes to shop at.
Hence, I feel that inculcating practices of the location of travel is essential as it has several benefits.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94097222222 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08876952894 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552083333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5443955226 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17018727994 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569191509578 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714082120328 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119184329535 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706193338792 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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