Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
There is no doubt that wildlife habitats are being destroyed and that whole species of animals are on the verge of disappearance due to human activities on land and in the sea. This essay will outline a number of reasons for this trend and a number of possible solutions to help tackle the issue.
There are two main reasons why animals exist. Firstly, the loss and degradation of natural habitats Now that pollution is stressful, climate change reduces the quality of the environment, reducing the living area of living species. Secondly, hunting and illegal trafficking are still worrisome dangers to animals. This leads to implanting in the ecosystem and directly leading to extinction. Many rare and wild animals are killed for the sake of serving human needs such as food, souvenirs, and high-end jewellery.
Some solutions could be adopted to improve the situation. Most importantly, governments and environmental organisations should impose strict regulations as well as provide support for native habitat restoration that assists in the recovery of once-degraded ecosystems. Governments and individuals must join hands to stop the illegal trade of endangered species.
In conclusion, natural habitat losses and illegal wildlife hunting and trafficking are the two main drivers of animal extinction. To address this issue, governments must protect and restore natural ecosystems, and everyone should join hands to stop the illegal trade of endangered species.
- The bar chart illustrates the percentage of adults who were overweight or obese between 1965 to 2015 while the pie chart demonstrates the part of adults who were overweight obese severely obese and healthy or underweight in 2015 67
- The bar graph below shows the entrolment of students in music in an Australian university from 2000 ta 2006 and the pir chart shows how they choose their career after their course 84
- the charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organisations in 2008 and 2014 78
- Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment 56
- In the past people ate local food in season Nowadays people buy a variety of foods from all over the world Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50220264317 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92653619503 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568281938326 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6655701636 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.083333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0372971779526 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0147843893218 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231814470876 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0252991310582 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185624618584 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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