Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of their society and other think young people should be free to behave as they will Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of their society, and other think young people should be free to behave as they will. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The topic of whether young people should follow the traditions of their society is of concern for many people. Some suggest that it is a good way to protect the cultures while some others disagree. As for me, I am convinced that youth should respect and keep their social traditions as many of them are worth conserving.

There are numbers of reasons for youngsters to follow the traditions. Firstly, many of the national traditions promote family and community harmony. For example, it is common to see that family members always get together to celebrate traditional festivals every year. Influen...

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I am convinced that youth should respect and
I am convinced that youths should respect and

As the younger generation are constantly exposed
As the younger generations are constantly exposed

young people should be given freedom
young people should have freedom

the youth are full of imagination
the youths are full of imaginations

it is common sense that
it is a common sense that

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