It is generally accepted that youthful people have there own globalize decision and modernization society. Some people hold onto notion that those who are following the society should be realize of culture and traditional. Still, personally, I completely agree with this idea that adolescence should be respect and keep social traditions. This essay is going to establish the reasons behind the idea.
Various points could endorse the cognition behind the idea. First reason to consider is that the social traditions are bearing the family and society to living together. Take my family, for instance, There are national culture called New yaear's festival that considered as family reunion festival which all of my family member come back to our hometown in order to spend time relax with a variety of activities. If we don't have this festival, Our family member won't be frequently able to see each other.
Moreover, there are many more benefits of keeping national traditions. There is no denying the fact that the national tradition can provide youngster to realize their sense of recognize their national identities. Research conducted by Oxford university indicate that 50% of youngster are growing up with the technology which will mark them to forgot their own roots. So that, youngster should be followed the custom.
However, Some opponents may argue that youngster should follow their own idea attend by modernize era, thereby, youngster aresuppose to have their own immagination and creation that allow them to create their idea. If young people are not restricted by traditional rules or terms, they are able to express their thoughts and ideas as they wish, which significantly enhances creativity and thinking skills. Perhaps, this seem innitially plausible, but it cannot be denied that the traditions are regarding as knowledge and common sense which provide enormosu of ideas to youndster that unable to eliminate.
To conclude, it likely seems to be understandable that the traditions are compared as based knowledge for younster. The challenge for them is to combine the traditions with the new technology in nowadays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
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Message: Did you mean 'realized'?
Suggestion: realized
...who are following the society should be realize of culture and traditional. Still, pers...
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Message: Did you mean 'respected'?
Suggestion: respected
...th this idea that adolescence should be respect and keep social traditions. This essay ...
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
... the traditions with the new technology in nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33923303835 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71676131126 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566371681416 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.734789692 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.470588235 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238432019432 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704341287509 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726394019478 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121225832519 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775359049289 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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