Some people today believe that the world is increasing population is Unnecessary will eventually lead to a global crisis other people believe that world population increase is a necessary and beneficial it creates the growth of world economy and society discuss both views and give your opinion.
Population has increased day by day in world which creates lots of issues for human. Some believed that overpopulation damage the bio-cycle of world while, other tend to deem that it is beneficial in economic prospects. In this essay I will discuss both views and give my opinion in conclusion.
On the one hand, majority of people agree that increasing population is unnecessary which lead a hazardous problem. What I mean that it can affect the environment. If world are flooded with people so it may be brought excessive demand of food and natural resources which are limited. Hence, it may loss biodiversity of eco-cycles and responsible for a many detrimental problems like deforestation, land destruction and many others. Moreover, perpetually growth in population increase the unemployment rate among people. For example, African countries are suffering from over population that is cause unemployment and poverty among people.
On the other hand, population growth is a beneficial if we look at it from some aspects. Overcrowding may produce extreme requirements of goods, education, accommodation and a many others. Due to that government will have to implanted many new businesses which bring enormous economic benefits. Moreover, people might be invested money in their child’s development and future. For example, India is the second highest country in population around 1.30 billion so government of India built more and more education and accommodation facilities which helps it in economy.
All in all, I believe that increasing in population has detrimental effect on society as well as on environment. So to tackle it government should take some measures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that overpopulation damage the bio-cycle of world while, other tend to deem that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, well, while, for example, i mean, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43726235741 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13281681498 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.486410367 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330634491641 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940714546129 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849298408294 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193877115706 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637446064927 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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