Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant
examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Some people believe that to protect local culture
some people argue that in order to preserve a certain culture intact, tourism should be prohibited in some places. others, however, believe that change is unavoidable and there are no real benefits that can be gained from banning tourism. Despite the fact that prohibiting tourism may contribute in preserving some indigenous customs and traditions, I firmly believe that banning tourism is futile in terms of halting cultural changes, and tourism is great way to yield a stable income.
On the one hand, some would believe that banning tourism in a country is the ideal way to maintain indigenous cultures and traditions. this is because friction with other people from different backgrounds will not take place. Therefore, locals will tightly adhere to their principles that they inherited from their ancestors and never get affected with other cultures. For example, tourists are prohibited from visiting some Amazonian tribes in South America so as to preserve their culture that spans thousands years back.
On the other hand, it is claimed by some that the ubiquitous internet has made the world a small village. cultures blend and fuse and many people around the globe in this era are able to explore others’ cultures, exchange ideas and interact with others who are thousand miles away. Also, tourism industry has become an integral contributor in reaping substantial amounts of money for a nation and society. For example, a statistical study that was conducted by the institute of tourism of morocco showed that more than 5000 local businesses are dependent on tourism.
In conclusion, I believe that banning tourism to protect local cultures applies just on few cultures that are considered as an international heritage. however, banning tourism is absolutely absurd and futile in terms of protecting local cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33561643836 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67354132779 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9887558161 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.846153846 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10951042497 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455353460852 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329576686007 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693216754 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534411438713 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.