Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people work for the same organization all their working life.However, now the society is developing day by day, the job opportunities are more open so others think that it is better to work for different organizations. I will discuss the above two views but I still support the last one.
On the other hand, there are groups of individuals who work in the organization for a longer time. When we work for a long time in a company we will learn a lot of knowledge, work with high productivity and get many good results therefore easily advance to the next position.However the worker will receive insurance later when they are old, they will have a salary paid by the company.
It is opposite that, some people consider that changing their corporation promotes career advancement. This is chane good for the worker who application different organizations help them show off their other talents. When you work old company that can't satisfy your passion for editing, a company specializing in editing will help you realize that dream. So, you will only help yourself to employers to skill but also help them to convince higher wages. Besides,it will advantage for us to have many relationships, to improve soft skills such as proficient use of technology, learn rich languages in the world through exchanges with customers, partners and more confidence.
Finally, we need to be familiar with all views to increase our skills and knowledge at our field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ame organization all their working life.However, now the society is developing day by d...
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Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ore easily advance to the next position.However the worker will receive insurance later...
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Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ore easily advance to the next position.However the worker will receive insurance later...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...talents. When you work old company that cant satisfy your passion for editing, a com...
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Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...p them to convince higher wages. Besides,it will advantage for us to have many rela...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, so, still, therefore, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95102040816 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88322208579 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620408163265 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7790665828 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.3 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382474520112 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144165931278 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149983307243 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232376464554 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173010093894 0.056905535591 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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