Some say that economic development is the solution to poverty; others say it is the cause of poverty. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your own opinion.
Poverty is a global problem. There are people who argue that the solution to this is economic development while others view that it does not solve the problem but rather causes it. I refute this statement, as I believe that economic development alleviates people from poverty for many reasons.
To begin with, a developed economy brings a lot of advantages to people, in terms of financial sustainability and education. Governments with good economic status have funds to support their population’s needs. For instance, authorities could create projects that generate jobs that would in turn support individuals and families financially. Most importantly, with a stable economy, education can be provided for free to the marginalized people in society. With literacy and educational achievement, individuals can find income-generating jobs to support their families.
Meanwhile, it cannot be denied that economic development sometimes increases the margin between the rich people and the poor ones. There are claims that an economically developed country only benefits wealthy people. However, this is a premise that needs to be addressed by the government's distribution of resources makes the marginalized society more oppressed. If the government has enough funds and resources they should provide social services, such as health care, free education, and jobs to those who need it.
All in all, there are many reasons why there is poverty but surely a developed economy is not the cause but one of the major solutions to eradicate it. Nonetheless, with increased government resources, public programs could be implemented to uplift the poverty in many communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nonetheless, so, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53307392996 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09147335873 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.545494061 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195290955421 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720630333447 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562479210191 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12860389928 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728364062019 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.