As co-curricular activities play a vital role in schools and universities nowadays, it has been suggested that music should be considered as a subject in academic. Eventhough music and other cultural activities are necessary for the children, I tend not to appoint that music is an important subject as other subjects such as mathematics science and languages.
From the cultural standpoint, learning of music help students to win in cultural competition such as arts in the schools. In detail, most of the students learn music to participate in competitions and to win prizes. In addition, the music helps to relax the students from the stress, which is basically related to the prolonged sitting in front of the books. To elucidate, continuous class section gets the student stressed and bored, so the musical classes help them to get out of pressure felt by the classes. Moreover, by arranging the musical classes from the preschool onwards gives the opportunity to build a career in that area for the people those who have a taste in this field.
On the other hand, if the students have no skills in the musical area, they suffered a lot to cope with the children those who have affinity to music. On the other words, this is a cliche for the students who have no taste the music or arts. Furthermore, music does not provide a better job in the future as the other subjects. To clarify, the subjects such as science and languages give a better career after the completion of the course whereas the music give job or satisfaction to the students those who are performing best. As well as the music never of a good future or carrier, so it is not a compulsory one in the schools.
According to the above mentioned reasons, it is better to conclude that music should be kept as an optional one in the schools, so that the pupils who have interest in this field can utilize this opportunity.
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries 73
- The Process of Milk Production
- The bar chart shows for the production and consumption of electricity in top ten countries in 2014 67
- The percentage of overweightchildren in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last 10 years Discuss the cause and effect of this 89
- the line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999 the bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7250755287 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7109345654 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483383685801 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8208351007 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176388785407 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715390968003 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046902084187 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11141748218 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066519314867 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.