Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?
Nowadays, uniforms have become a prevailing type of clothes used in most schools on a global scale. While a large quantity of students claim that they are forced to abide by their schools’ rules when it comes to uniforms, others are allowed to wear unrestricted kinds of clothes. The essay will clarify both the benefits and drawbacks of having a uniform.
It cannot be denied that uniforms can form serious consequences to students. Firstly, having to put on their uniforms will lead to students’ inability to express themselves with their own styles of clothing. By contrast, those not wearing a school uniform can experiment with different clothing styles in order to find something that will suit them. Secondly, there is no scarcity of families who cannot afford the price of uniforms. As a consequence, strict rules in terms of uniforms may put these families under severe strain of having enough money to buy them.
One should, nevertheless, consider the issue from another angle. The first positive aspect of uniforms which can be seen is that they enable the school to cater for their students over a large area with no difficulty. Consequently, if the child is lost, the uniform is the sufficient facilitator to find him or her. In addition, uniforms play their roles in eliminating the gap between poor and rich students. Due to the fact that all the students have to wear the same thing, students will not distance each other for their families’ financial status. For instance, a school in Vietnam embodies the usage of uniforms perfectly, and has witnessed radical changes in students’ attitudes towards others.
To conclude, I am convinced by the view that uniforms have both advantages and disadvantages which have been clearly mentioned in the essay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1433447099 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84628542598 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600682593857 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8711915483 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.466666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339041042248 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108347051682 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059804167135 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219174224948 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428432342985 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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