Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils while other schools have a very relaxed dress code.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of having a school uniform?
Some schools consider the school’s outfit a very important thing to be carefully controlled for all students, while others see that this should be left to the students choice. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of forcing a united school uniform.
On the one hand, having a formal united uniform gives the students the feeling of unity. Meaning, all of the school's pupils will act as one and will have a sense of connection to each other. Moreover, when all students have to wear the same outfit every day, none of the less financially able children will feel embarrassed about their looks. For example, schools can be a tough place for a poor kid, especially when all of the other kids try to show their designers clothes and their latest dresses.
On the other hand, giving the youngsters a control over their choice of what to wear will give them the ability to express themselves. And the freedom even in small things will go a long way in feeling more relaxed and control-free. Unfortunately, this is something that united outfits can’t provide. A new study has shown that the children that were given the chance to choose their clothes on daily basis shown a greater development of their right brain hemisphere.
In conclusion, United uniforms give the student a sense of being a part of one organization and protect the feeling of the non-wealthy, but it also restricts their freedom and their ability to express themselves which might cause a feeling of stress among the students.
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Suggestion: all the
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a feeling of stress among the students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87984496124 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61417658845 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573643410853 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4490310224 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32404905254 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114693142335 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715119480381 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187519517612 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974421547564 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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