Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on the other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is commonly believed that there are other shapes of existence outside our planet.While some researchers believe that it is a good idea to contact them, others think that it can potentially cause complications for people.
On the one hand, connecting to extraterrestrial beings means we will able to approach a completely new creature, so this activity is the opportunity to explore alien civilizations. If life exists in actual fact on another planet, then the data about their lifestyle, culture, history or language can be a valuable source that enriches human knowledge. Besides, those life forms might possess a large amount of information about the galaxy or the universe which humans have not acquired. This somehow helps us in finding a suitable place to inhabit in case the world's population grows too fast or uncontrollably.
On the other hand, some people believe that if other creatures learn of our existence, terrible scenarios will occur. Because of the uncertain details of alien beings, the language barrier seems to be the big problem. To be more specific, messages sent from Earth could have a different meaning for them, the misunderstanding can put the human in danger when they negatively interpret the messages. With advanced technology compared to what we got, all earth creatures will inevitably suffer casualties.
In conclusion, from my perspective, it is quite risky and dangerous if scientists decide to create a relationship with life on another planet but I believe the understanding from outside the place we live outweighs its negative side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...tially cause complications for people. On the one hand, connecting to extraterr...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...ne hand, connecting to extraterrestrial beings means we will able to approach a comple...
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Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this life' or 'those lives'?
Suggestion: this life; those lives
...that enriches human knowledge. Besides, those life forms might possess a large amount of i...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...a suitable place to inhabit in case the worlds population grows too fast or uncontroll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, then, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2766798419 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03706011834 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660079051383 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.548216211 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23279878798 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742686934625 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598444073 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130492573904 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527641625785 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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