In our modern world, everything has become more complex and many people live under pressure caused by the stress in our daily routines. However, some people think that people in the past lived more stressful life. I partly agree with both statements and here are some examples to support my opinion.
To begin with the fact that everybody wants to be successful and has a good quality of life. This leads to endless competition with others because everyone wants to be better. In some societies having a good education and secure well-paid job is a top priority but to achieve that people have to go through a lot of stress. For example, if you are a businessman, you need to work every day for your business and focus all your energy and thoughts into it, which definitely will lead to stressful way of living. It not a coincidence that most of the wealthiest people do not have happy personal life or suffer from mental problems, caused by life under pressure.
On the other hand, people in the past did not have so many job opportunities which made their life stressful because they did not have enough money. Moreover, previous generations lived in relatively turbulent times and were forced to participate in wars. Ordinary people lived under pressure because of the insecurity about their safety. For instance, when the second world war broke out thousands of men joined the army leaving their families without knowing whether they will come back.
In conclusion, I believe that each generation has its own disadvantages, whether it is about inability to find a job or to live a happy life. For me, living under pressure is just state of mind and everyone can choose to live their own life. The balance between secure job and loving family is the key to success.
- The charts below show the number of French adults whose parents spoke a French regional language to them when they were children and the number who speak a French regional languange to their own children 64
- In some socities stress is now regarded as a major problem and it is thought that people suffer from more stress than they did in the past. However, others feel that the amount of stress people have today is exaggerated they say that previous generations 61
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Suggestion:
...nce between secure job and loving family is the key to success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79804560261 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51068444394 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5141516869 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264789574289 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876672108359 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103932489248 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158540246773 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902572034039 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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