Some studies show that criminals get a lơ level of education. Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is educating people in prison so they can get a job after leaving prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that educating offenders in prison is a method to reduce criminal rate in the future. While I agree that this method can contribute to the crime reduction, I am convinced this is far as the best way to deal with crime.
I accept that education for prisoners may contribute to the reduction of crime. One reason is that it improves their behavior and equips them with working skills which are essential for them to earn a living after being released back into society. Besides, this form of education build in offenders sense of value and self-worth to encourage them to perform better in their life after imprisonment. As a concequence, criminals may demonstrate more empathy towards others in community, and stay away from committing crime again.
However, it is believed that educating offenders is not the best solution to reduce crime since this has far less preventive value. One reason is that this form of education is only applied to those who had committed crime. Others solutions such as stronger punishment and long imprisonment can be taken into consideration since they help deter people who have a intention of carrying out crime. Additionally, school education has a huge impacts on crime-fighting. One example of this is organizing crime education at schools which undeniably help raise awareness and prevent young generation from commtting crime.
In conclusion, although in-prison education contributes to the reduction of crime, I strongly believe that this is not the best way and there are more effective and sustainable ways to have criminal rates reduced in the future as crime education at schools and severe punishment.
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: impact
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13653136531 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87109059018 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553505535055 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5699827847 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26405553512 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110237969461 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631605304199 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183344720785 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498068829991 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.