As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibility. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that, alongside making money, businesses should be responsible for giving something back to society. I strongly agree with this statement.
First and foremost, it is undeniable that the major purpose of business is earning money. If a business makes money, it has to pay the small amount of money for taxes. governments can take advantage of these money to investigate facilities for society such as hospitals, schools,... Furthermore, when making money, business also create opportunities for employees to earn a living. Thus, both businesses and workers are beneficial.
Additionally, the impacts of business on society are remarkable. When running a business, people must ensure that their manufacturing activities do not harm to the environment. environmental problems such as global warming, pollution, factory emissions should be reduced to the lowest rate. Besides, some activities which are helpful for the community such as charity, providing financial scholarships are typical examples business should do to contribute to the development of the society.
To conclude, I totally believe that social responsibility are what businesses should do as well as making money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Governments
...ay the small amount of money for taxes. governments can take advantage of these money to in...
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Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...axes. governments can take advantage of these money to investigate facilities for society s...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...s for society such as hospitals, schools,... Furthermore, when making money, busin...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Environmental
...ivities do not harm to the environment. environmental problems such as global warming, pollut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65555555556 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16822573706 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9329298811 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341572628238 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125310995423 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109406453834 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233043793555 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119805167912 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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