Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage at school
Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?
It is believed that exchange student brings lots of benefit to all the adolescents at school, especially at this moment. While there are admittedly several drawbacks to exchanging international students, I believe the positive influences of this growing development are more significant.
On the one hand, traveling abroad may cause several drawbacks such as the language barrier which is often one of the most difficult trials during the exchange. For example, Vietnamese students who travel to Australia may find it hard to speak their native language fluently and communicate with them by different accents. Moreover, pupils studying abroad may suffer from homesickness, as a result, their mental health could be affected negatively, hence depression or anxiety may have occurred. Lastly, struggling with health insurance is another major problem, especially at this Covid 19 moment.
In spite of the aforementioned issues, the merits of this trend are more considerable. First of all, Students will have a chance to adapt to an unfamiliar culture and take part in diverse rituals. Furthermore, traveling overseas will increase students’ independence, this should be a sporadic moment for children to figure by themselves how to survive in other nations without parents dependent, self-discipline is really important during the exchange curriculum. Last but not least, those pupils have chances to study with better education systems.
In conclusion, while this trend has lots of disadvantages such as homesickness, as well as language barrier, not to mention health insurance, I am opinion of the opinion that they are outweighed by the more significant merits above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, really, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55078125 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06683914142 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6484375 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2356317737 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.181818182 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1818181818 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145088005322 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528001186773 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543832767258 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881605982885 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483724274296 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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