Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, online courses have gradually become a subject of considerable concern to many universities and colleges all over the world. There are several advantages and disadvantages with this problem but in my opinion, this trend can bring numerous benefits to not only students but also the public.
On the one hand, traditional classes cannot absolutely be alternated by online training sessions. It is widely known that along with theories taught by professors on the lecture hall, students have to do numerous practices and experiments related to the knowledge that they studied to understand clearly every aspect of the issue. For example, learners in engineering or medical areas, they need to attend many practical training sessions to accumulate actual experience before joining real jobs at the company or hospital, which may help them avoid making mistakes after graduation. Obviously, this is quite difficult in virtual classrooms where students have to be active to look for opportunities in practicing what they have studied.
On the other hand, online courses can be highly beneficial in many cases. They have high quality comparable to ordinary classes yet much more flexible. Evidently, only with an Internet connection, students can take part in online training sessions at anytime and anywhere. For example, mobile electronic devices such as smart phones and tablets are becoming really popular in today's society and they can fulfill the needs of studying for everyone. Learners can learn in their spare time at their own pace and watch lecture videos as many times as they please. Not only that, many universities also open courses for the community, which lead to updated knowledge can be universalized to all people from different regions in the world.
In conclusion, it is true that there is a deficit in online training methods associated with practical experience. However, there are more obvious advantages in terms of flexible time and universalized education.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 453, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...actical training sessions to accumulate actual experience before joining real jobs at the company...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, really, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in many cases, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34285714286 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78372334226 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596825396825 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1322885571 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.214285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12721259328 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493579445262 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03741895821 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812157462553 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220983572144 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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