Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the issue of university subjects has been brought into focus recently. Some people think that students need to spend all the time on studying main subjects to get the qualification while it is considered by other that learing other elective subjects is also useful. From my perspective, I believe that it is significant for students to learn main courses, while elective curriculums also need to learn.
There are serveral reasons why students need to pay more time in learning main subjects. Firstly, the main subjects are play an important role in students future life. This is because main subjects also connect students future job, which means that if they learn it well and get the qualification, they will become more competitive in the labor market and get a high income level, which can protect their live standard and have a more comfortable life in future. Secondly, mian subjects are difficult to learn well and many universities have higher requirements in main subjects, which means that if students want to pass the exams and get the graduation certificate, they need to spend more time on these subjects.
However, this dose not means that the other subjects can be overlooked. Many elective subjects can help students learn main subjects well. For example, when students learn computer subjects, if students choose to minor design course, which can help students design more amazing and fashion computer website screen because there is a crossover between disciplines. Moreover, other subjects also can cultivate students interests and make students become more comprehensive people who can have more chances to choose the jobs they are keen on. This is because many companies prefer to employ inter-disciplinary talent, if students have more different fields knowledge, they can have more opportunities to have a good job.
In conclusion, main projects is important for students to pay more time and attention to learn, while the other subjects also need to learn.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...andard and have a more comfortable life in future. Secondly, mian subjects are difficult ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23364485981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74834162062 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479750778816 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.018160103 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.230769231 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346057806402 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155741773628 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784675516565 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258641332299 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588844865405 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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