Some university students want to learn other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent years this becomes a challenge among people which want to learn extra fields simultaneous with their main course. According to some they should have full attention on their main study rather than else. In my opinion it can be a beneficial opportunity for students that learn different things like.
On the one hand learning more subjects can give you more ability and you can improve your skills. In the university you have to pay attention on your main courses and don’t have any time for learning additional useful subjects and issues. Hence, you should look for an opportunity for learning your interest. Although may have not enough time it useful to learn even though fewer. Students like learn a lot about different things and not only do they have pay attention to this notice that their courses should not harm but also, they would have a grateful schedule for their work. Therefore, you can learn extra subjects in the same of your courses.
On the other hand, this can make help you in the future and strong your resume and background. A student without any experience and skill never hires in any company and organization. If you have a good resume by subsect careers beside your main occupant this, make the employer, choose you. In addition, sometimes fields and subject which be learned are more important than your main major. There are lots of companies that looking for people who taught different things. But this might you refuse in your main course if you have extra attention on sub subjects than your main aim. Sometimes this leads to fail and fire from university.
In conclusion, totally this issue is pretty awesome if students have this chance to select extra subjects for learning because help them a lot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85284280936 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34980716617 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52508361204 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.287911859 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3529411765 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305109738791 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10401876913 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599877898828 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185066865989 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624852936758 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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