Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
These days many young generations avoid to live in the countryside and move to live in cities and only old people have remained. This situation makes lower the local economy and reduction of the residents in local areas. I will introduce the problems thoroughly and suggest the solutions to deal with.
Firstly, the main issue which is caused by this movement of youngsters from the countryside to cities is to shrink the regional economy. By reducing the main labour resources such as young people, regional commerce collapses and minimise the scales and the situation has been continuing. Secondly, disappearing the stability of the country towns is another problem caused by this movement. According to the young generation movement, the birth rate has decreased and the mortality rate has increased which results in the extinction of the rural area.
To avoid these problems which have already been processing in rural areas, it is necessary to cooperate with both personal and public efforts. Especially, the intervention from the local county is essential to create the supporting laws for young residents. To cover up the drawbacks of giving up the city’s various benefits, local counties should offer settlement funds or tax exemption benefits to habitat the target area more easily. In addition, the local community also finds a new way to survive the local economy such as the tourism industry. Whether they are old or young, the residents should participate in the local discussion to modernise the traditional industry and find a new industry to survive their own area which can boost its local communities and help people work together in the future.
In conclusion, the problems which are caused by the young people’s exodus from countryside are the collapse of regional economy and of town itself and the solutions which can be tackled are to create supporting laws for new residents on the areas and modernise the traditional industries and improve the new industries in order to participate in the new and old residents together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid living'.
Suggestion: avoid living
These days many young generations avoid to live in the countryside and move to live in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2042042042 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79025684858 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507507507508 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.5071356256 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.307692308 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209192990119 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761679479955 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677735170244 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144620165492 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611542188775 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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