Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
With the hope for a better livelihood and career opportunities, many young adults abandon rural places and migrate towards metropolitan cities, resulting in a large population of old and elder people behind. This has created social and economic problems which needs local and community support to address them.
Majority of the young population residing in the countryside migrate to major cities in need for education and better job opportunities. As villages and small towns lack well developed education system, it is harder for students to excel in academics. Adding to it, limited job opportunities with minimal pay scale exacerbates the living condition in the villages. Because of such constraints, villages at present have enormous population of senior citizens who are left alone to survive. Firstly, most of them are old and frail who needs medical aid. As the age advances, they are faced with general debility and age related medical disorders and no young member to look after. It is also proven that maximum old population suffers depression due to loneliness. Secondly, most of the local traditions and customs are dying out due to such migrations, as there are no young followers to practice it.
From economic point of view, most of the people are farmers or unskilled laborers involved in local goods production which generate local revenue for the welfare of villages and small towns. As most of the older population would not be able to meet the requirement of the market for producing goods due to physical limitations, local revenue will get hammered. It would be difficult to meet ends and will add to further difficulties. Moreover, agricultural turnover would not meet the present day demand for foods and may produce food deficit for entire community.
Nonetheless, to overcome such problem local and national authorities should formulate combine steps to avoid migration of youth to cities. At local level, schools and colleges at countryside should be equipped with modern technology and equipment's to deliver quality education to pupil of rural areas. Along-with this farmers should be provided with modern instruments and provide subsidies or minimal tax for local goods. National authorities should allow industries to be set up at such rural areas which will encourage adults to stay at their native place. This will not only allow to earn good and stable income but also to practice local custom and traditions. As young adults can also look after farming with their jobs, production of goods can be maintained at steady rate.
Summing it up, mass migration of youth to cities for betterment and prosperity has led to socio-economic problems which could be sorted out with a hand from local and national authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22072072072 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76515311464 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538288288288 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6640073247 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.380952381 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130473428186 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397393833683 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277113024297 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754489450257 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271106153657 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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