Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives.
Firstly, when people change their hometown, they have new oportunities in ther lifes. As well as, meet a new culture with different lifestyles and custons. Sometimes it can be very shocking but at the end, it became you a more opened person.
Futhermore, in this new culture people sometimes have the challenge to learn and speak a new lenguage, which makes you a more complete and competitive professional.
Also, change your country, can help you to improve you lifestyle. If the new country has a high level of life, you and your family can enjoy it and grow up in that enviroment.
On the other hand, many people prefer to stay in their hometowns. One of the reason are emotional stuff. And they stay to follow the relationship with their relatives and give a familiar enviroment to their children, staying with their relatives closer.
Besides, other people choose to stay to develop their carees in a place that they already know. Continue working in the same job and buils a future plan. Sometimes when you change your hometown is not clear in wich area you will work.
To sum up, in my personal opinion is very possitive to change your hometown for a time, maybe two or three years, and have the opportunity to live abroad and learn about a new culture. But at the end of that experience, is good return to your city to develop a family next to your relatives. For me the emotional part is the most important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...rea you will work. To sum up, in my personal opinion is very possitive to change your hometo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68650793651 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54803623642 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2814728419 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200406872828 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680713438192 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935010409704 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102159744335 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867798794235 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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