Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives.
It is thought by some of the young people for higher education they think they need to shift to metropolitan cities and for their future also. While others think that they need to stay their birthplace where they lived so far and want to continue living for the rest of their lives. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument and I will provide my overall opinion at last.
On the one hand, nowadays children are thinking who lived in villages for a long time and they want to shift to big cities in order to look for their future because they have seen in movies that most of the people living luxuriously and enjoying their lives. However, thinks will be different unless they experienced like staying for a month in a big city for the village people it will be difficult for them. For instance, the number of farms are vanishing day by day, due to the industries are overtaking and the younger generation selling land and they are shifting to cities.
On the other hand, some children do not want to live their birthplace because they have so connected to their home towns, starting from their birth until they started working. If they shift to another place due to displacement they can't adjust, maybe they stay only for a week maximum. Furthermore, some adults love agriculture and they came back from IT due to the pressure and environment of living is also matter to them.
To conclude, I would say that living in their own place will be beneficial rather than migrate to towns because they cannot stick their long due to the environment changes or climate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
It is thought by some of the young people for higher education they ...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...etropolitan cities and for their future also. While others think that they need to s...
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Line 9, column 233, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... another place due to displacement they cant adjust, maybe they stay only for a week...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66312056738 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36574526661 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528368794326 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8597658856 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284300572321 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134806266364 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105111927038 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20329840397 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533142134283 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.