In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
These days technology is improving as day by day goes, so as well as people are changing according to that likewise structure and the leadership of the family is also changing. In this essay I will mention what are the modifications are happening and that alteration will impact on good things or bad things.
On the one hand, the changes are mandatory for the essentials of human beings without that they can't live. In earlier days, women used to a housewife and their daily job is to take care of the house, children and grandparents. However, nowadays the husband prefers for the dual-income also and they are allowing their wife for jobs for the sake of money so that they lead a very good life. For example, the government has organized a survey in India and the result is that women occupations in job are increased by 60% and it now 70% of women are working today, but earlier survey result is that only 20% of women are working. The female is now head of the family and they are taking serious decisions with the husband and they can feed the family alone and they are independent. The size of the family is decreasing and they are splitting also.
On the other hand, the modifications are happening in today is huge impact on children because nowadays both are working so they cannot concentrate on children like what are the activities so intern they might chance to ruin their life. In olden days, mother used to take care of children and they are working their homework and they kept eye on their children. The pron is that female are equally dominant in any field and they are independent also. The government had made a rule for all religious but some caste female will follow old rules.
In conclusion, there are lot changes are occurring in recently, but there will be a good impact and bad impact will also be there with that alterations. The most of the impact will be on good itself for women and their life style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
These days technology is improving as day by day g...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tials of human beings without that they cant live. In earlier days, women used to a ...
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Line 5, column 842, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ly is decreasing and they are splitting also. On the other hand, the modificati...
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Line 9, column 446, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...t in any field and they are independent also. The government had made a rule for all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60057471264 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44724190298 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462643678161 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2758148026 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101177421942 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404712811408 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545465332693 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739525331829 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057181855263 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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