In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
Nowadays, roles are shifting towards women and the number of members of the family is reducing day by day. Firstly, this essay will discuss why families are changing and secondly, discuss changes in roles and responsibilities of family is a good sign or not.
On the one hand, if you compare the family in the olden days, the members of the family are minimum and it would be 15, where grandparents to children every one staying under one shed But now the modern family has only 5 members. Some children leave their parents in the orphanage, so the structure of the family is reducing. Roles and responsibilities would be taken men only in the olden days, as days go in a modern family where no one is head of the family because everyone is working both wife and husband. Responsibilities have to take by both to lead the family and to take care of children. Nowadays people are moving to urban and towns in order to look for jobs and they are staying there. For instance, in 2018 most of rural people are staying in urban cities.
On the other hand, roles are changing in the family this a good sign because there is no discrimination between men and women both are equal, but the number of group family is dividing into single-family and the structure are also changing. For example, the University of London completed a survey in 2017 that women workers are more than in any other year.
In conclusion, the roles of the family need to change that everyone has to contribute their role, but the members of the family are decreasing as they splitting among themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63452111979 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0865623776 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247096438163 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980077396269 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769712294905 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1702922725 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189120276564 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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