Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What’s your opinion
In this day and age, space exploration has been attracted much concern from people all over the world. It is believed that universal adventures cost a lot of money which should be used for more significant things. I completely disagree with that idea because if human did not fly into space, they would not either improve the current sciences quickly or respond properly the needs of people nowadays.
Thanks to the space exploration, natural industries are now developing faster than ever. Human are able to create and invent a lot of devices playing important roles in modern life such as anti-scratch glasses, LED lights, artificial satellites and etc, although it took lots of times to make these ideas become popular. NASA’s scientists also claim that worldwide sciences are not willing to change without universal discoveries. LASIK surgery is an examle. It allows nearsighted people to see normally without glasses, was developed thanks to technology that tracks astronauts' eye movements in a zero-gravity environment, thereby applying lasers to perform eye surgery for nearsighted people.
Additionally, people’s questions about universe might be answered. Our Earth is just a small planet in space, and there are many things outside people do not know. I assume that some people used to wonder few questions like: “ What is outside the Earth? ” or “ How can human go to the Moon? ”.To reply these, they have to experience and discovery themselves. Perhaps, they can find some interesting researchs such as a new natural resource to solve the proplem of running out of fuels.
To sum up, space exploration is really necessary. In stead of spending money on other things although they are eminent, universal adventures contribute huge advantages to human enhancement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24390243902 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78660701343 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672473867596 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.7892130739 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157825938321 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461549133453 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049673249832 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976925417939 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553078512039 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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