In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this case?
What can be done about this problem ?
Needless to say that undernourishment wreak havoc not only on developed nations but also on third world countries which have led to a catastrophic scenario caused by infinite reasons which conjoint to add insult to injury. This essay is going to outline the causes and solutions of the problem before coming to the final decision.
To pinpoint the paramount of causation behind undernourishment in spite of advancement in agriculture is nothing but illiteracy. To comprehend this point,here is a definitive illustration that when farmers are less educative or illiterate they are unavailable to use the advances made in agriculture for instance they are unware of what medicine have use to protect the crops form bugs and bacteria. Another infamy root is lack of land are losing because of making construction which becomes unavoidable inescapable. To epitomize the current status, we can say that,day by day people are constructing new factory,housing or airports and for that they taking the farming land also.Thus , due to the above mentioned reasons people's hunger is majorly affected.
we know in totality actions speaks louder than words. There are colossal ways and means to combat the harmful impact of hunger on this globe but onus is entirely on providing knowledge to farmers . Consequently they will able to use the advancement of technology on agriculture. Another unquestionable panacea is providing large number of manure which can protect the plants and crops which is also one of the best resolutions to counter this peril by leaps and bounds, Furthermore , to counter the problem of solving hunger problem around the world , providing free land for cultivation can be done. For example , many studies have consistently found that , a great number of farmers are landless .And due to lack of lands they could not grow crops. As a result people are still facing hunger. Thus, if the above steps are taken appropriately this problem may find their solution.
In conclusion , this cause needs attention and expedite action to protect out planet from starving. Its is possible not by enforcing or by enacting the law.However it should be done by means of educating people about its nasty effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, third, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17927170868 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95457677344 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.08279768 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.266666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285464515561 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773119808967 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05338284936 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146380794237 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428333864787 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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