In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?
Modern agriculture technical improvements emerge and are adopted as time passes. Despite these achievements, numerous people around the world inevitably suffer from starvation and famine. In the subsequent phrases, I will examine the reasons of food shortage as well as potential remedies to such problems.
A variety of factors make a contribution to the worldwide state of hunger. Notwithstanding agricultural breakthroughs, food scarcity has become more of a concern in many countries. Low-income households frequently go starving and run out of money, forcing them to subsist on a restricted supply of food. Additionally, small-scale farmers lack adequate warehouses for their supplies, allowing insects and bad weather to destroy their harvests. Another issue associated with food shortage is increasing populations. There aren't enough grains farmed to support the burgeoning population.
Humans should effectively prevent stockpiling and take adequate precautions to avoid food waste and reduce hunger and malnutrition across the world. Many people have the bad tendency to purchase more food than they really need. Individuals should instead buy the necessary food and store it for later use. Individuals should also keep their food appropriately. Fruits and vegetables that are improperly preserved deteriorate quickly. Restaurants, for example, should make it a habit to give out extra meals to people in need. Furthermore, governments should offer storage facilities to small-scale farmers so that no crops are wasted and food supply imbalances are efficiently resolved. Aside from that, the government should set severe laws to limit population increase.
To summarize, individuals become hungry as a result of inadequate food storage and utilization. However, effective measures, such as financial support, can help avoid food waste and ensure that it reaches those who need it the most.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, really, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75531914894 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1022613448 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663120567376 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5924299671 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.4210526316 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8421052632 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0734306008916 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224336001342 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290905288886 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0491559367066 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182762392446 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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