In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this case?
What can be done about this problem?
Starving around the world plays a harmful role in a modern life. Naturally, it has a powerful influence and its impact is often negative. Although we might not like to admit it, starving around the world has created certain unpleasant consequences for human beings. The present essay aims to explain the problems of it by offering two fundamental solutions.
Notably, starving around the world during agriculture development has several serious problems. In the first place, growth of population around the world causes people to need more and more food so that out of date machines and equipment in agriculture are not efficient and sufficient. In fact, some countries are not able to produce crops because of environmental issues. For instance , people's activities without controls make soil erosion then they can not have high quality agriculture which leads them to be starved.
In the second place , producing enough crops is needed countries and nations keep pace with cutting edge technological developments in agriculture. If counties can not afford to make or export these stuffs ,they will face with some problems about providing crops and food
As an illustration, the highest percentage of hungry people is in poor countries like africa because unfortunately local people use ancient techniques for harvesting and so on.
There are some effective solutions to solve this issue .for one thing ,government should put special budget on education. In fact ,it causes young people to be trained knowledgeable ways in agriculture, protecting environmental. An example may help clarify the point. In Europe, farmers should take some courses to learn how to face some environmental issues like water shortage or how to produce GMO food for lots of people. Another possible solution is that people should be less consumer rather than present time . It makes more people to access to food instead of wasting them.
To sum up,it can be stated that on the basis of the above,starving people is devastating and horrendous. We should take effective measures to eliminate the problem of it and get rid ourselves its menacing side effects. The hope is to make a safer place for new generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, then, for instance, in fact, for one thing, to sum up, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19491525424 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86218317431 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618644067797 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0564726505 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7894736842 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184236209813 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502369490919 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413829875364 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871688332118 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325751284432 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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