Student should choose a university major that prepares them for high paying careers To what extend do you agree with this statement

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Student should choose a university major that prepares them for high-paying careers
To what extend do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, tertiary students are struggling with this question. What do I want to be for a living?. Some people say that students should pick out a university major that allows them to get a well-pay job. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement, and I will explain more details in this essay.
Firstly, choosing a university major is an important decision that should be taken from a long term overview linked with their own interests. Moreover, students should take a major which they fell comfortable studying that and think they will enjoy doing that job. Therefore, their selection should be supported in their own interest because If they do not take it into account, they could fail getting their degree. In fact, in the first year at the university, many students change their majors because they do not fell a real link with some subjects. Thus, It is important to select a major related to their interests.
Secondly, every day we can see many graduate students looking for a job unsuccessfully. So, they have to consider how many students get a job after graduate, in other words, whether the career is employable. For instance, I have a friend who chose an employable career which is not well pay, but he is happy and got a job in one month after graduate that allows him pay the rent. Thus, is better chose a career in which they can get a job than select a well pay career that would be crowed, and it will be difficult to get in.
In conclusion, I disagree with this statement, and two reasons support my preference. First, students should choose a major thinking in their own preference with the idea of getting a job that they will enjoy. Second, they should pick out a career with a good employability rate that allow them to get a job in less time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
... rate that allow them to get a job in a few time.
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60883280757 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57936160903 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498422712934 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3445098283 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315049790288 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118867839285 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485267051538 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222531493076 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925544072236 0.056905535591 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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