Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted.
How far do you agree with this statement?
It is argued that nowadays there are a lot of students who got addicted to using the Internet because it’s so popular and available for many students all over the world. While the Internet offers convenience, others believe that the internet has more drawbacks, especially for the educational field. In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement that the Internet should be restricted for education.
There are several reasons why education on the Internet is not good for students. Firstly, the main cause for this trend is the covid 19 pandemic which has to make students use the internet for educational purposes widely. This makes a huge of students get addicted to using the Internet for playing games, chatting, and doing homework. As a result, students will be affected by health issues such as obesity, depression, and eyesight problems. So, education on Internet will influent students’ health.
I also believe that the internet should be completely restricted for educational needs. To begin with, education on Internet will impact students because when students use the Internet to learn, their teacher can not supervise students like face-to-face learning because they don't know what students do through the screen. Moreover, the online test will not fair as the face-to-face test at school because some students take advantage of online learning to cheat.
In conclusion, I believe that restriction is the best way to solve the drawbacks of the internet in the education field. We should be prevented any educational problems due to misuse of the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, so, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27165354331 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76870201203 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555118110236 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8153738116 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435956638735 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177823632662 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818484021203 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280307558963 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902964841457 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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